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Cambridge Primary Checkpoint 0837 · Topic 9 of 10

Writing emails, messages and stories

Writing clear emails, messages and short stories that answer every part of the task.

📌 Key points

  1. Read the task carefully and include every point it asks for.
  2. Emails and messages to friends: a greeting (Hi Sam,), your message, a closing (See you soon, / Best wishes,) and your name.
  3. Use friendly, informal language with friends. Use polite, formal language with teachers or people you don't know.
  4. A short story needs a beginning, a middle (a problem) and an end (how it is solved).
  5. Use linking words: and, but, so, because, or.
  6. Use time words to order events: First, Next, Then, After that, In the end.
  7. Use adjectives and adverbs to make writing interesting: a huge, dark cave; she ran quickly.
  8. Keep to the word count, then check spelling, capital letters and punctuation.

📖 Key words

Greeting
How you start a message: Dear…, Hi….
Closing
How you end a message: Best wishes, See you soon.
Informal
Friendly, chatty language for friends and family.
Formal
Polite language for teachers and people you do not know.
Linking word
A word that joins ideas: and, but, because, so.
Word count
The number of words the task asks you to write.

✏️ Worked example

Task: Write a message to your friend Ali. Say where you are going on Saturday, who you are going with, and invite him to come.

  1. Plan: there are three points to include (where, who, the invitation).
  2. Greeting: 'Hi Ali,'
  3. Message: 'On Saturday I'm going to the science museum with my cousin Dara. Would you like to come with us?'
  4. Closing and name: 'See you soon, Karwan'
  5. Check: all three points are included, with capital letters and punctuation.
💡 Test tip

Tick each point in the task as you include it. Missing a point loses marks, even if your English is perfect.

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